Wednesday 26 June 2019

Mr Frosty and the bmx kid

Under the blue sky were God and the bmx kid were talking about life. The bmx kid asked God “Can I have a choc top with all the sprinkles?” God said “Nothing in life comes for free mate.” They looked out to the lake and thought the god dropped his ice cream in the lake when the bmx kid bombed into the lake and then he came back to God and God bombed into lake they were talking and the bmx kid was lying on the grass.

Veylyn's independent writing:
Surprisingly God leaped into the lake creating a massive bomb.
The bmx kid made Fountain of spray.the bmx jumped of majestic mountains the bmx kid was looking at the stare at the sky got was eating ice cream for free God had a delicious treat in his van.
The bmx kid was looking at the sky with God and they hit the water.


Tuesday 25 June 2019

animals of the Rainforest

God and the BMX kid


Jumping  off the edge into the lake went the BMX kid as he bombed.

Under the blue sky were God and the BMX kid talking about life.

Surprisingly God leapt into lake Wakatipu creating a massive bomb.

Wednesday 19 June 2019

waterfalls description

While walking along the path with my dad and brother l could hear a sound like a humming swarm of bees and thundering noises. Cascading over the edge was a simply spectacular view of slippery smooth rocks and green and lush trees surrounding a beautiful waterfall. I could rushing water and could feel the sprinkling like rainfall which was perfect for this Hot summer day. As l was ready to return home l walked through the water which felt like mud as squishy as slime l washed my face and went home with my dad and my brother. I felt good at school and l was eating morning tea after morning tea time l like rainbows and l like going home with my dad and my brother and my mum l have to go school 4 days of school like playing on the playground me and carlos going to the big park we saw a sound called cortez l like going to the play kahoot on my chromebook and l like waterfalls and l like my dad everyday, l hug my dad all the time. l hug him, l like going to school everyday l like going to nan’s and otahuhu l like youtube. I like going to the waterfalls with my dad,my brother and my mum l like movies with my dad and my brother and my mum too l like maths at school and l like morning tea time and l like books and l like trees that are growing l like sat on a chair l like my class photo l like xbox one l like going to watch youtube l like GTA Aoto l like game