Wednesday 26 June 2019

Mr Frosty and the bmx kid

Under the blue sky were God and the bmx kid were talking about life. The bmx kid asked God “Can I have a choc top with all the sprinkles?” God said “Nothing in life comes for free mate.” They looked out to the lake and thought the god dropped his ice cream in the lake when the bmx kid bombed into the lake and then he came back to God and God bombed into lake they were talking and the bmx kid was lying on the grass.

Veylyn's independent writing:
Surprisingly God leaped into the lake creating a massive bomb.
The bmx kid made Fountain of spray.the bmx jumped of majestic mountains the bmx kid was looking at the stare at the sky got was eating ice cream for free God had a delicious treat in his van.
The bmx kid was looking at the sky with God and they hit the water.


Tuesday 25 June 2019

animals of the Rainforest

God and the BMX kid


Jumping  off the edge into the lake went the BMX kid as he bombed.

Under the blue sky were God and the BMX kid talking about life.

Surprisingly God leapt into lake Wakatipu creating a massive bomb.